Im glad you used 3 completely different approaches to the word “city”. Personally I think your first design is clear and looks great as it.
I’m having a difficult time figuring out what word is your word. Also I beleive that you need a final Draft for whatever your word is. Also could you critique my work? I just need one more http://kisdota.wordpress.com/2012/09/26/project-2-exercise-2-2-final-photo-2/
Hey Stacie! I think is great feedback! I like the idea of using text that is different that the word “city” and utilizing letters for shapes instead of words. Maybe in the final design, you can use the word city in a more subtle way by using it, for example, at the tops of buildings. ? What do you think? Great progress!
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Interesting solutions 🙂
Stacie, do you have Blog Write Up 2:1- it is a brief summary of the changes you want to make after your class feed back. ?
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